Sunday, August 2, 2009

Meinu samajh naa aaye

Hi
Today posting my second poem named SAMAJH.This is a poem I have written from my own experiences.This is just my attempt to understand this so called "DUNIYA".But my attempts fail and I have to accept what Gurdas Maan Sir said in one of his songs:
"Sadh naal ki tenu chor na kee, Beh ke aapni naber tenu hor naal kee"
Frankly speaking this one was not much appreciated by my friends. May be because I somewhere failed to find proper words but I personally like it.
Please read it and give your suggestions because I need to improve.

---------------------SAMAJH--------------------
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,
Koi akhe Khuda mano,Koi kahe Ram-Ram,
Koi kahe hai Isa vada,Koi kahe Nanak da dham,
Je har dharam di eh sikh hai,
Ke rab sirf ik hai,
Phir kyon dilan ch eh fik hai,
Kyon rab de naa te aj kise da ghar fookeya jaave,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,

Koi akhe sab hai moh-maaya,Koi akhe sab hai paraya,
Fir kyon hai is paise ne,aj sabh da hosh bhulaeya,
Je hai har koi jaanda kai paisa naal nahin jaana,
Jadon jaana is duniya ton bas khali hath hi jaana,
Fir kyon eh paisa aj sabh nu hai bharmave,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,

Koi akhe kisan ucha jo duniya nu khawawe,
Koi kahe javaan he ucha jo saadi jaan bachave,
Koi taan "Jai Jawan Jai Kisan" da naara lave,
Phir kyon aj sabh ton jyaada kisan hi marda jaave,
Kyon ik javaan aapni kismat te pachtawe,
Eh kaisa insaaf hai koi taan meinu samjhave,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,

Chad dila duniya di taan ehi hi kahaani hai,
Jithe jag muhre aaun ton darde ne,
Asal wich othe hi aani jaani hai,
Karna tu vee kuch nahin bas likhan hi joga hai,
Asal wich tu vi paaya jhuth wala choga hai,A
sal wich taan mera dil vi hai darda jaave,
Bhagat Singh aave aave,par mere ghar naa aave,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye,
Meinu samajh naa aaye is duniya di samajh naa aaye

Bikram

2 comments:

  1. Splendid!
    If this is a original work indeed I would suggest you to start copyrighting your struff.

    Very Nice Poem Indeed!
    ~Ankur

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  2. Brutally honest & original especially the last punch.

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