Posting another poem today... Well this poem is just a result of my own frustration on myself.. but somehow it gives me a lesson to NEVER EXPECT FROM ANYONE... Expectations always hurts and Its my mistake if I expect something from someone... Love should be given without any condition and this is what I need to learn.... Hope u will like it...
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Aj fir aapne aap nu mein marde hoye dekhaya,
Kise aapne di khushi te sadde hoye dekhaya,
Kise te jhuthe ilzaam madde hoye dekhaya,
Aj fir aapne aap nu mein marde hoye dekhaya,
Aj fir labh rehaan haan mud aapni pehchan mein,
Kinni maadi meri soch jis te kari betha maan mein,
Kinna bura mera aks sachi ho rehaan hairaan mein,
Aj fir aapni chita nu mein aapne hathi sekeya,
Aj fir aapne aap ......
Aj fir aapne naal meinu nafrat jehi ho gayi hai,
Jehdi rooh massan jagai si aj fir lage so gayi hai,
Jehdi vaad kade khili si koi bahri hawa sho gayi hai,
Aj fir aapne jameer nu kodi de mul mein vechaya,
Aj fir aapne aap ......
Aj fir meinu lageya ke jeen di ki lod hai,
Je neenh hi enni buri hai, ghar paun khunon ki thod hai,
Je manjil te kade pujna naheen, kyon valna eh mod hai,
Aj fir aapne chehre te namoshi de rang nu vekhaya,
Aj fir aapne aap .....
Chad moorkha aiven pakhand karen, teinu aaunda vi ki hor hai,
Tu shuru ton hi jaandaan tere aapne andar hi chor hai,
Tu duje nu ki kehna hai tera aapna rona mukda naheen,
Duje de hanju ki pujenga tera aapna athru sukda naheen,
Par aiven kyon tu fikar karen tera chalna vi ki jor hai,
Tu taan bas ik kathputli hain jihdi daate de hath dor hai,
Us daate jaisi likhi hoyi, teinu sab jarna paina hai,
Kade haarke tu jittenga, kade jitke harna paina hai,
Kade marke vi jeena paina kade jeeke marna paina hai,
Eh khel na dil te laa bethin eh baazi taan tu harni hai,
Bas chup chaap sab sahi ja, koi chu-pe na tu karni hai,
Tu hune hi ghabra gaya hain, aje badi vaari sooli chadni hai,
Badi vaar aisi maut marni hai,
Badi vaar aisi maut marni hai,
Badi vaar aisi maut marni hai....
Sorry for being critical at the first review itself
ReplyDeletethe idea is at somwwhat incoherece with the prologue provided at the top.....e.g. nothing shows about the failure in expectations....also such failure is not to be compared with the "aap hi marda vekhna". the phrase suhd have been more apt for some fallacy on self's part......
otherwise detached from the theme at the top the piece is a nice one....good to shake some obdurate inconsiderate fellow....
and the thought bout HIS MASTERLY GAME is very soothing....exactly at resonance with gurbani.....to teach the mortals that that thay are but puppets in the IMMANENT INTRANSIGENT'S HANDS.....and to devote one & all unto HIM....
NICE ONE
Hmmmmm thanks Sunpreet for ur comments..
ReplyDeleteYes u are right that the theme of the poem is difficult to relate with prologue.. but probably that fallacy of self is result of that disappointment..
Sorry If I am not able to give a prper justification at top...
But thanks a lot for commenting yaar... Your feedback means a lot for me...