MERE GEET

Hi,

Sorry posting after a long time... was busy in exams but truly speaking it was my negligence only due to which was not able to post. So lot of things happened in this time... Indian Test Cricket Team at No.1 by breaking many records... a record breaking winter too... 3 idiots also broke many records... So many record breaking eventssss... After all records are meant to be broken... So posting my three poems today... Each one is really special for me... Please have a read and give ur feedback.... and please do not forget the latter.... I need ur feedback really...

First one is MERE GEET....

Mere geet meinu chain de naal saun nahin dinde,

Khul ke hassan nahin dinde, Raj ke raun nahin dinde,

Mein roz paya samjhaunda haan ke mein likhan joga nahin,

Jehde fal di aas tu kare mere andar oh choga nahin,

Fir vi eh kamle man nu eh samjhaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu.........

Mein nit navaan makhauta paa duniya de muhre aaunda haan,

Kade hase de vich ronda haan, kade roke vi muskaunda haan,

Par eh jhale meinu asli muh lukaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu.........

Mein zindagi vaali guthi nu samjhan di koshish jar rehan,

Jeevan di is bisaat te rab di har chal nu pad rehan,

Par eh jhale meinu paheli eh suljhaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu.........

Mein koshish kar rehan haan kise daag nu mitavan di,

Jehda rog meinu lag gaya ose tu mukti paavan di,

Par eh jhale meinu jholi meri lukaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu.........

Mein nit aapni akal te maan kar itraunda haan,

Apne hi sapneyan vich roz ambran nu taaki launda haan,

Par eh bhede meinu zameen ton utte aaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu.........

Chad dila hun eh geet tu char din hi gaune ne,

Jehde asool hun manni bethan tu aap hi bhulaune ne,

Ik din sab kuch bhul ke tu kar geetan de naal chal jaana,

Fir tu aapne faayde layi duniya di bheed ch ral jaana,

Fir geet teinu te tu geetan nu tolenga,

Fir dila eh sab gallan kihde naal farolenga,

Shayad ehi sach meinu bhulaun nahin dinde,

Mere geet meinu chain de naal saun nahin dinde,

Khul ke hassan nahin dinde, Raj ke raun nahin dinde,

Khul ke hassan nahin dinde, Raj ke raun nahin dinde,

Khul ke hassan nahin dinde, Raj ke raun nahin dinde,