Story of Life

Hi,
Posting my first poem, Hope you like it. I have tried to narrate whole life of a human being in some lines. Writing it in english here(not in PUNJABI) so that my friends who cannot read punjabi but can understand can also read it. I have already send this poem to my close friends and they have really liked that. Hope you all willl like it too.

------------------KAHAANI------------------------
Pehla daur si bachpan wala jadon shuru hoi kahaani,
Khed khed ke mitran de naal mauj badi si maani,
Oh umar badi anbhol si,Jadon sach hunda har bol si,
Chan nu mama bada ke maneya, Oh saman bada anmol si,
Aaj vi e yaad meinu maa di khuai choori,
Pata hi na lagaa, oh umar kadon ho gayee pooree,

Agla daur jawani wala jadon bhakh gayee kahaani,
Is umaro daso mitro kis ne mauj nahin maani,
Is umare poora josh si,Jadon sanu naa koi hosh si,
Odon jo galteeyan kitian, Us wich kise da na dosh si,
Aaj ve e yaad meinu beliyan di oh dhaani,
khao pio mauj karo, odon si bas ehi kahaani,

Fir aa gaye asi adkhad umare jadon mathi payee kahaani,
Jadon kabeeldariyan payeean, odon asi surat pachani,
Eh umar vi kamaal hai,Jadon sir to jhadde baal ne,
Jado paise bacha ke gin ke nikalde saal ne,
Udon he khayal hunda bacheyan nu kuch banaun da,
Aapne rehan lai koi thikana jeha banaun da,

Aaakhri daur he budhi umare jadon khatam honi kahaani,
Hun taan bas sochda haan sari umar kidaan maani,
Jadon maut nede aayee hai,Har vele khani dawai hai,
Is umare hi mildi par pote poteyaan di vadhai hai,
Hun sochda haan ki khateya mein sari umar lake,
Paise ikathe kar kar ke aapna eh ghar bana ke,
Hun taan eh sabh kuch ethe hi he reh jaana,
Tere naal taan bas bandeya tere change kamaan jaana,
Tere naal taan bas bandeya tere change kamaan jaana,
Tere naal taan bas bandeya tere change kamaan jaana,

My first Blog

Hi,
Today writing my first blog. I have not ever thought that I will do this.But life is strange.Read somewhere "Life does not gives you what you want but it gives you what you actually need".So probably this is what I need.I got idea of Blog writing from one of my friend ASHWANI when I told him what I actually want to do. Then I read BLOG of my another good friend VISHAD who is great in writing. Though I am not as good as him but still will try to give my best.But now when I have started I am still confused what to write about. But then coming back to my idea what I told to ASHWANI, I want to share some of the poems which I have written. But now I am thinking that "Who in this world will waste his/her time reading my poems?????". I just started writing around 4 months ago and I think I felt it as aneasy way to express my feelings. First I thought of keeping these poems a secret but then I thought how will I improve if I will not get any feedback???? And I have alway believed in KNOWLEDGE SHARING. The more you share, more you learn.Hopefully I will not bore you all there. Apart from poems I will also like to share some of my favourite songs having brilliant lyrics(I think) and to share experiences of my new hobby i.e.Book Reading. So please give me your valuable feedback ji.
Your friend,
BIKRAM